User:Moaazlafi/Hilal Khan Ghazi Mosque/SherifaOsman Peer Review

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Moaazlalfi
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Thanks Moaaz for the Article. The article starts with a "Lead" section as an introduction, the language used is simple and clear. Also the use of the visuals is chosen carefully. I would recommend if you divide the "Prayer Hall" section as it's a bit long. The content is comprehensive and knowledgeable.