User:Mocseny3/Cyropaedia/Micah6001 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

(Mocseny3)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mocseny3/Cyropaedia?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Cyropaedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

Some of the information from the genre section and the lead summary could be combined.

Genre

This section was a good addition, and made sense to add.

Content

If possible, adding some more information about books two through seven would be beneficial.

Reception

Adding this section and splitting up some of the information presented in the Legacy section makes it easier to read and understand.

Legacy

I agree with your decision to remove some of the information from this section. What you removed was a slightly irrelevant and downsizing the section was a good addition to the article.

Sources

The references you added are reliable and are from legitimate sources.

OverallThe additions made to this article overall brought a lot of new information, and are greatly beneficial to the understanding of the article.