User:Mofei Wu/Infinity Net: The Autobiography of Yayoi Kusama/Lightcorot777 Peer Review

General info
Mofei Wu
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mofei%20Wu/Infinity_Net%3A_The_Autobiography_of_Yayoi_Kusama?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
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Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I like how you dive deep into the background of the piece, as it provides ther eader with a great deal of important context. Your usage of sources ties well with argument of the piece. Using background information about other pieces made by Kusama allows more insight into the topic Kusama deals with in her pieces. Nice formatting and easy to read.

It may help to have a section about the piece itself, and an analysis on it, similar to what we did for assignment 0402. This will also provide you with evidence for your argument, and you can have your sources to back you up. Consider adding an image or two (if you can) o the piece itself. It's nice to have a visual guide!