User:Mohrra3748/Onchocerciasis/19dazahn Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mohrra3748


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Mohrra3748/Onchocerciasis


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
User added information regarding specific prevention methods as well as some data on the signifcance of onchoceriasis while maintaining a neutral tone. Sources chosen are reliable and well known. This user provided semi-recent data from 2013 concerning the prevalence of this disease, which pairs well with our class content. I would be interested to see the statistics similar to this for other regions of the world, as currently all countries listed are in Central and South America only. User could perhaps expand on the articles existing diagnosis section by detailing how long diagnosis takes from exposure or just the test duration time itself. Perhaps could link existing PCR, skin biopsy, or antigen testing wikipedia pages in diagnosis section as well. Overall, user has written clearly and concisely, providing the reader with a more distinct and developed understanding of onchoceriasis.