User:Mohrra3748/Onchocerciasis/Campenhe6493 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mohrra3748


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mohrra3748/Onchocerciasis?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Onchocerciasis

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Overall, reading the article and the added information seemed to fit well. As well as the sources cited seem to be derived from an academic journal or reliable sources such as the CDC.
 * When reading the prevention paragraph, I believe the updated statistics and information was necessary and helps the reader understand it in today’s perspective However, look if there are any other updated information regarding countries who have eliminated it that is later than 2013.
 * The content added is necessary in updating this article and the added information is more up to date.
 * There does not seem to be any bias in the article and would not persuade the readers opinion.
 * In the epidemiology paragraph, you could add some updated information and facts. For example, the death report and global burden provided is from 2002. Maybe look at the same source and see if there is a more relevant date to provide.
 * Also, a consideration to add to this paragraph is any information regarding the incidence or prevalence of the disease in specific areas or globally.
 * The content added is well written and does not have any grammatical errors.
 * The content is neutral.
 * A consideration to add is looking for another up to date academic journal to add since there are several sources from the CDC and WHO.
 * The page is organized well, after the sixth citation, "South Africa Section" is listed twice.