User:Moillet/Streaming television/Adamjiwa Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Moillet


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Moillet/Streaming television


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:Moillet/Streaming television

Evaluate the drafted changes
The first paragraph where you wrote, "It was the beginning of a new era," could be considered as emotionally leading.

In the section for Amazon, "Amazon each year invests in the production of films and TV series," "Each year, Amazon," would be better for the sentence structure.

In the binge watching section, instead of saying, "and a sort of healing for people," use something less leading like, "the attitude of the watching episodes back to back to back allowed populations a therapeutic relief." Add a source.