User:Moillet/Streaming television/Bigtimenaenae Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Moillet


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Streaming_television
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Streaming_television

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Before reading, in doing a brief scroll through, I can appreciate the overview section, as a visual aspect, being that is the only visual provided. Not when it comes to the Lead, it is short, sweet, and to the point. The tone within this article is very straight to the point, with no fluff. Each subtitle is full of strong and neutral content. The points of view are never off-topic from what I read thus far. I would only add some visual components. Each of the links that I checked is up to date, and still working. The article is very informative on the topic of Streaming television, which is new within the last 5-10 years.

Is there a subtopic that the editor would have liked to add, but was unable to for whatever reason?