User:Moillet/Streaming television/Lvmcintire Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Moillet


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Moillet/Streaming television


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * User:Moillet

Evaluate the drafted changes
LEAD: there is no lead listed

CONTENT: there is no content listed

TONE AND BALANCE: There is no article listed

SOURCES AND REFERENCES: you have many references. The first one, Barnes Brooks, was asking me to pay to subscribe, so you might check that one. Sources appear to be current.

OVERALL IMPRESSION: you have done your research, now just begin editing.