User:Moirarose2/Criminal psychology/Frenchfrygirl2 Peer Review

== While reading through the added information in the Nurse Practitioner article, I thought a lot of the information was education and informative. The added sections made the article flow better and provided more information that was needed on this profession. I overall felt as if the sections were written clearly, however, there were some statements that seemed like opinions. In the Qualities section of the article, it states, “It is crucial for nurse practitioners to possess a set of characteristics in order to succeed in their field.” It also states in this section how nurses should act. This section could be a bit more neutral, but the information is very important, and I think this section is otherwise written very well. The Duties section is written very well, and I think the information is very important to the article. It provides important details of what nurse practitioners do, and other tasks they perform. Overall, I think these sections added were clearly structures, and provide balanced coverage. The only thing I would fix about it is the neutral point of view in the one section, but the rest was very well done. Everything seems relevant to the topic, and nothing seemed to distract me. The links provided work and took me to the correct website. Each fact is supported by a reliable source, and each source backs up the facts statedGeneral info ==


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 * In the history section you have a good amount of information added and I like how you include the origination of it and what aspects of criminal psychology
 * The define of applied psychology is also useful for understanding the meaning
 * In salary the factors that contribute to the amount of money one will make is very helpful and I think readers will appreciate that
 * workplace also has good additions I wish you would add some more information on what they would be doing in each of those locations and what their main purposes are
 * All of your content is very relevant to the topic and you do have a very unbiased tone
 * All the sources are very relevant and useful