User:Mokent23/Evaluate an Article

Evaluate an article

 * WikiProject American Football: (WikiProject American football)
 * As a child I played American football al the way up to my freshman year of college. It has been a part of my life as long as I can remember. I have always played the sport but I have never studied the history behind it.

Lead
The lead of this article that was provided by the WikiProject is clear on what the topic is about. It opens with basic information needed to understand American football. Such as terms, where it originated, and the basic rules of the game. The lead gives a descriptions of what you will find in certain sections but not all of them. I do believe that the lead is overly detailed and gives too much information for the rest of the article to flow. All pieces of the lead are covered in the rest of the article but when you get to the other sections of the article a large part is repetion of the lead.

Content
The WikiProject gives outstanding content on the topic. They provide a variety of different of articles and citations. Each with detailed information on a different aspect of American football. For example, they have articles geared towards different teams on the collegiate and professional level and also give insight on the different leagues that have been created over time. The content is up to date and gives information and undervalued to such as the brain health of the players and their injuries.

Tone and Balance
The WikiProject is neutral in the sense that it gives accurate information on the topic without having a bias on a certain team or certain players. The articles chosen and the citations used give a great balance on what is American football. I saw no claims that the articles used were biased in any way and gave a good thoruogh description of the topic at hand.

Sources and References
All the facts used in the WikiProject have been backed up and can be backed up by multiple sources. They also provided numerous sources in order to give the best array of information. The sources used are current and have even been updated when needed. Any links I clicked such as teams, rules, or terms all sent me to the correct source for the information I needed.

Checking the talk page
Most of the conversations in the talk page are centered around reference fixes and changes. However the WikiProject group does a good job of responding to these changes and fixes and keep them informed.


 * Where are your sources on the new collaboration between the NFL and Roc Nation? Morgen Kent ~


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