User:MollyPribble/Darkness into Light/AlphaBetta Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

MollyPribble


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:MollyPribble/Darkness into Light


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Darkness into Light

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

At a high level, I think some of these changes might not be the best fit for the article. While the purpose of the event is for Suicide prevention and awareness, I am not sure if the subsection fits into this article. For instance, the lack of suicide prevention plans in most countries does not seem directly relevant to the topic of this article. I am also unsure about adding a section for Pieta House, especially since the section as written primarily references primary sources.

There are some thing that I think are an issue in the current version that might be improved here. For example, links on the "darknessintolight.ie" domain (primary source) do not resolve.