User:MollyPribble/Darkness into Light/Aukwiri Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

I am reviewing Priyathakore, Katieshanley13, MollyPribble's article on Darkness into Light.


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:MollyPribble/Darkness into Light
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Overall great article, clear, concise and factual. Easy to understand and provides relevant history on the topic. Starts off with a strong lead that introduces the topic of Darkness into Light well, providing background and relevant facts. However, the lead could more directly reference each of the following sections.

The content in each section appears very pertinent to the topic and provides readers with a multidimensional understanding to the history of Darkness into Light and its purpose. The manner the article is organized is also very easy to follow and understand. The tone throughout the entire article is neutral, and there does not seem to be any sort of bias or attempt at persuasion. The sources seem to fit well, clicking through a few of them, it appears that the links work, and reading through the sources seems that they have reputable information from a diverse selection of authors, and the article accurately reflects their content. There do not appear to be any images or media.