User:Mollyskinker/Eurhamphaeidae/LeaKathleen Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing
 * Mollyskinker


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mollyskinker/Eurhamphaeidae?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Eurhamphaeidae

Evaluate the drafted changes
The lead is not super strong, if the first sentence is your lead (I'm not sure). I like how you list it's origins like what phylum and family its in, I just don't think you should use it as your intro.

your basic morphology section is good, very detailed. But i would definitely add links to a lot of the words in that section that the average person might not understand, or just briefly define them.

Ctenophores can use bioluminescence for many different purposes including prey attraction, mate location, [to] startle predators, or predator evasion ( I would add to startle predators rather than "startle predators".)

According to observations made by Hamner et al. (1975), (Im not sure adding a citation is necessary in this context. maybe include the information in a way that Isn't paraphrasing it and get rid of the citation.)The current produced moves water toward the body and mouth of Eurhamphaea ,and other Lobata, resulting in prey being drawn toward the mouth (I would take out "and other lobata" from this phrase, I don't think its necessary)

Otherwise, I think this article is really strong with lots of good information. Good job! I think you should include some information about the general ecology. I hope this feedback was helpful, good luck!