User:Mollyskinker/Eurhamphaeidae/MSabb1234 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mollyskinker


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mollyskinker/Eurhamphaeidae


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Eurhamphaeidae

Evaluate the drafted changes
Introduction:


 * Great start to your introduction/beginning. From what I understand, this section is suppose to be somewhat of an abstract, I think we are supposed to include some key details from other sections here though.

Basic Morphology:


 * Clear and concise. I like the way you broke it down, and included the synapomorphies of the parent taxa.

Bioluminescence:


 * Great overview of bioluminescence and how it relates to your taxa.

Auricles:


 * You did a great job elaborating on the auricles; it really helped me understand and imagine what you were describing.

Overall:


 * Great job so far. The only thing that I would like to see is a brief description of reproduction and feeding habits.