User:Mollyyg/Social cost of carbon/Envs2455 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

PurpleSnails


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:PurpleSnails/Pesticide_drift?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Pesticide drift

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your draft looks pretty good, you have some solid sources and explain in clear terms what methods can reduce pesticide drift. I would suggest adding a few more sources, but you might also need to add some more text correspondingly, and if there aren't any more methods to reduce drift then you might be out of luck. But your sources look relevant and up to date. You also change from the third-person to second-person at some point so be sure you have everything standardized to one or the other. Great job though, I think the overall article is more complete with your added section and it gives very pertinent information.