User:Mollyyg/Social cost of carbon/Kyliehc Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mollyyg


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mollyyg/Social_cost_of_carbon?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Social cost of carbon

Evaluate the drafted changes
So far I think you are doing a really good job! The addition of the formulas in the Carbon Pricing Recommendations as well as the different models in the Calculating portion of the article were great additions! Also, adding all those different paragraphs under the United States portion was really well written and they flow really well. They were also written from a neutral point of view and were relevant to the topic. The only thing I would consider is to add a few more ways in which carbon affects us in our lives. There are many listed already but I feel like there can be more added in terms of the environment but that could also be a whole other topic as well. Great work!