User:MoltenuniverseSL/Transvestite pass/Bunny322 Peer Review

Lead- Mentions the different parts of the article in a clear and concise manner. One thing that is mentioned a few times but is not in the lead is the focus on male-to-female passes given out.

Content and Organization- Everything is related to the topic and recent. It is also well organized.

Tone and Balance- Tone is neutral and facts do not favor one opinion over another.

Images- All are relevant, well placed, and have appropriate captions.

Sources- All facts are cited and recent. They are also from a variety of authors. Links work but some of the sources are not open access.

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(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)