User:MomokoT/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
The article I am evaluating is NetEase Cloud Music.

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
This is a music streaming app I use every day. It provides an online music community for people to listen to music and share thoughts together. I chose this article because the content needs to be more comprehensive and updated. As a famous music streaming app in China, this article needs improvements in many parts.

Evaluate the article
Lead Section

The lead section includes an introductory sentence that describes NetEase's audiences and overall development. It needs a brief description of the article's major sections. Overall, the lead section could have provided a better summary of the topic and its following main sections.

Content

Under the main section, "Business service," the Wikipedia article contains a subsection called" NetEase Depression Cloud," which is an online trend in NetEase music and has a weak association with its business service. This subsection should be removed or added to a new section. The content of this Wikipedia article is not up-to-date. The "Listening Limitation" section says NetEase Music does not provide an English version. However, the English version is already published. Also, the stable releases need to be updated.

Tone and Balance

The article uses words like "biggest" and "only," which is not very neutral. It mentions NetEase music's limitations but does not mention its advantages. This results in an unbalanced overview of this application.

Images and Media

The Wikipedia article did not include any images related to the topic.

Talk Page

The article is of interest to several WikiProjects: Apps, Companies, China, Internet, and Radio, and it is rated as a Stub-class, Low-importance article. There is one discussion on this page, mentioning the citing problems of the article.