User:MomokoT/NetEase Cloud Music/Jessiej12 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

MomokoT


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:MomokoT/NetEase Cloud Music


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * NetEase Cloud Music

Lead

 * The beginning is very concise, and states the core theme of the whole article, including the composition of NetEase cloud music, the background of the company behind it. New data (creator user data for 2022) is cited here, which improves upon the introduction
 * Useful and completed list of references

Content

 * I think the content of this article is very much in line with the content of software introduction, that is, it states the basic software composition, the introduction of the company to which the software belongs, and the influence of the software in society
 * I think we can add some background and events about the founding of NetEase Cloud Music on this basis, so as to enrich the content
 * Contents are relevant to the topic and are balanced

Tone and Balance

 * Good job on the tone and balance of the whole article! It is very introductory for me to read and understand the structure of this application.

Sources and References

 * You add a lot more useful and new sources to the original, and even fix some of the less sound evidence. NetEase Cloud Music is relatively new to foreigners, so Chinese users are more likely to find problems in the original wikipedia article. I think you're doing a great job!
 * Sources are neutral and have enough credibility

Organization

 * The article as a whole looks very orderly. The content of each section is just right. Especially the last part of the article about the controversy, I believe this software must have more disputes than the two things you mentioned. But from the sources you cite and the description in the article, I can see that these two events are the most representative.
 * Each breakdown of the article is in place and well down

Images and Media

 * This article doesn't use too many pictures. My suggestion is that since what you introduce is a software, you can show you the software interface of NetEase Cloud Music, or the company's pictures and so on, to enrich your article

Overall Impressions

 * In addition to the suggestions I mentioned above, I think you did a very good job, especially in getting a very big improvement from what was already done in this topic. The suggestions I make are very subtle, probably because I prefer to read an encyclopedia article with more illustrations. But I think you've done a great job!