User:Momoney2001/Tchoupitoulas Str/Gharri12 Peer Review

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 * I think you should talk about the pronunciation of the street, I always drive across it and never know how to pronounce it, i just think that would be a nice touch. I really like how you talk about how its a tourist spot.

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