User:Momoney2001/Tchoupitoulas Str/Inspiration 2.0 Peer Review

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Username: Momoney2001/Tchoupitoulas Str


 * User:Momoney2001/Tchoupitoulas Str
 * Tchoupitoulas Street (Link to the current version of the article)
 * Tchoupitoulas Street (Link to the current version of the article)

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The lead section on your article is good. It doesn't have excessive information, just enough for people to know what you are talking about. I do feel that your article could use a little more information, especially in your tourism section. For example, you can add more information about the restaurants like include what they serve and how it relates to the history of your street, you can add more restaurants to have like a variety of different foods that they would serve, and you can like attractions that people can visit and see. In addition, the last sentence in the tourism section, I think you should reword it or make it to where it does not seem like you are trying to persuade people to come stay on that street. One big thing I noticed is that you do not have any sources which can be a big problem on Wikipedia and with our teacher as well. For grade wise, you can get points taken off immediately for not have sources to back up your facts. I also think you should add more to your history section, You can talk about what neighborhoods are on that street since you included that it "slowly turned into a residential and commercial area." Like explain that a little bit more and you can maybe relate it to how it used to look back in the day. Last thing, I think you should definitely include a picture or two so people can see what the street looks like, especially if they have never visited New Orleans before.