User:Momotones/Thallium poisoning/Bibliography

Article Proposal
In the Wikipedia article on Thallium Poisoning, it is not unsalvageable but there are many changes I would prefer to make. The lead section of the article is the most confusing. I would like to rewrite the lead strictly as an introduction. The current lead in the article is scattered, and should not be considered a good introductory paragraph. Points that were made in the lead section were good, they just did not belong in that section. I want to move those down into the middle of the article while also adding more background information. I plan on including more chemical properties of the element and precautions to the lead. Furthermore, the main section of the article seemed to be far too sparse and almost unrelated. A lot of the information needs more details and pieces to really get a point across. As I stated earlier, I would move more points down this section also. There are plenty of new facts and details on the poisoning that I found to be beneficial. A lot of the points already made I do plan on just elaborating a bit further on. The sections of diagnosis and treatment are high on my priority list to make changes to. It needs many more ideas and documentation of the health effects and the treatment. Although it is not as important as the rest, I still would like to really check through the cases stated in the “Notable Cases” section to make sure they are reliable.