User:Mongellip/Public speaking/Madison.glascock Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mongellip


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Mongellip/Public speaking


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Your article edits were good, but there was only one citation and it wasn't put in. Just go through and look for punctuation errors and how to male the sentences stronger. You did good adding in public speaking at the end, just add more to this section!