User:Monika2801/OCAP Principles/Melo1999 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Monika2801


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Monika2801/OCAP_Principles?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead

You lead was very good, with thoughtful use of linked Wiki articles. It gave a clear and concise definition of your topic, and addressed what will be covered in the body of the article.

Content

Your content was all relevant to your topic. I found this sentence a bit confusing: "First created to bring governance to data about the communities OCAP was created to ensure that Western communities have rights about information that is being produced about them."

I also think you could maybe break down the history section and provide more detail about the situations you addressed and their relation to OCAP.

Tone and Balance

Your tone was clear and straight forward, and there was a good balance in terms of information to opinion (the article was unbiased).

Sources and References

Great use on linked articles and references.

Organization

The categories and structure of the article make it easy to read and understand the topic. Potentially could use so more information in the Components of OCAP section.

Images and Media

Final draft could use some images.

New Article Criteria

Your article meets Wiki's new article criteria.

Overall Impressions

So far so good! With the addition of some images, a bit of restructuring in the history section, and maybe so more information in the Components section, you will have a high quality article!