User:Monika2801/OCAP Principles/Yiwang13 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Monika2801


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Monika2801/OCAP_Principles?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Hello Monika：

I really like your introduction part and the structure of your article. Your definition is clear and easy to understand, and your structure contains some significant sections. However, the content of each section needs to be more detailed. For example, in the history section, you have included the date and institution where OCAP Principles was founded, but additional information is missing, such as the purpose of its founding, how it was established, the challenges it faced during its establishment, etc. Also, the influence of OCAP Principles might be a good section to include in the article.