User:MonsieurHans


 * 1) First, what does the article do well? Is there anything from your review that impressed you? Any turn of phrase that described the subject in a clear way?
 * 2) This article does a good job of covering the wide array and history of the subject.
 * 3) What changes would you suggest the author apply to the article? Why would those changes be an improvement?
 * 4) Add a few more sections to split up the body of the article, maybe find the titles of the works that have been displayed.
 * 5) Add a little more background about what RunwayML is and what it does, this will help the reader understand why the subject is important.
 * 6) What’s the most important thing the author could do to improve the article?
 * 7) I think polishing up some additional sections will help the article flow better.
 * 8) Did you notice anything about the article you reviewed that could be applicable to your own article? Let them know!
 * 9) You had a lot of external links, I will be going over my article to see if I missed any that I can add.