User:Monsteramom/Hedera cypria/RileyD101 Peer Review

General info
Monsteramom
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Editing User:Monsteramom/Hedera cypria - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Hedera cypria - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Lead
The lead is better with the changes; however, it could do a better job of introducing the information mentioned throughout the rest of the article, rather than just the information being added. That is to say, the updated version of the lead is leagues better than what it was originally. They also do a good job of keeping the lead concise while still managing to add new and relevant information.

Content
The content added to the article serves to increase the understanding of the subject and introduce new material as well. The information is also up to date.

Tone and balance
She does a good job of maintaining a neutral and professional tone of writing throughout the article and blends the added information well with the preexisting information.

Sources and references
all new information is citied with relevant and trustworthy sources.

Organization
The original articles organization was non-existent, so any level of organizational change would be beneficial. The changes made serve to make the information more easily digestible and makes it much easier to understand. where the original article was just a block of text, the proposed changes section out information in a clean manner.

Images and media
There are plans to add a picture, of which the article would greatly benefit. However, this is not set in stone.

Overall impressions
This article was in desperate need of improvement, and they have done an excellent job at elevating this article to one that houses well organized and accurate information. It read well and was not hard to understand.