User:Montzecasillas/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Rocky Mountain Showdown

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I am a student evaluating an article for my class and decided to review a recent event and what better than the Rocky Mountain Showdown which happened September 16, 2023. After reading the Wikipedia article I was impressed by the statistics that were provided along with the insight I gained after reading the article.

Evaluate the article

 * Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Is there anything that distracted you?
 * Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that could be added?
 * Can you identify any notable equity gaps? Does the article underrepresent or misrepresent historically marginalized populations?
 * What else could be improved?Is the article neutral? Are there any claims that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?

Upon reading the Wikipedia article the "Rocky Mountain Showdown," I first noticed how short the article was as it only contained a few paragraphs as well as a total of two sections, not including the "Game results" portion of the page. Although the article lacked in regards to the length of information it provided, there was short and concise information that supplied substantial data and details regarding the football rivalry.

An addition I would make to this article would be to add current highlights about the game such as the recent traction the Colorado Buffaloes have gained since switching to their new coach, Deion Sanders. An example of this, could be the change in management which has greatly boosted CU's reputation and earnings, as well as Boulder, Colorado economy as a whole. Significant stars and news covering were also seen at this game which could've also been a factor for this boost in economy. Overall, the Rocky Mountain Showdown is arguably noted to improve the economies of the communities it is hosted at thanks to the stream of profit that is made from nearby restaurants, local businesses and tourism.

I would like to read more about the fierce rivalry between the two schools, as well as the significance the game plays for these passionate fan bases.