User:MoonRabbit1992/Forensic psychology/Dalia Arafat5221 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

MoonRabbit1992


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:MoonRabbit1992/Forensic_psychology?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Forensic psychology
 * Forensic psychology

Evaluate the drafted changes
It seems like the lead section of the article was already concise and clearly/briefly covered all of the major topics of the article. I'm not sure what you plan on adding to the article, but just make sure to briefly summarize any significant additions to the rest of the article in your lead section. I think the "Notable contributions to forensic psychology" section is a good addition to the article. Some of the sections in the current version seem underdeveloped and could be further expanded on. For example "Forensic psychology in popular culture" could maybe include more about how tv show/movie representations of forensic psychology can be misleading.

I like the section on expected pay in this field, especially the brief inclusion of the pay disparity. I'm not sure how I feel about you moving the pay information under "Training and education." I think it may fit better as its own section like it is in the current version of the article. If you wanted to, you could probably include potential careers in this field as well. I know that this won't be in the final publication of the article, but I appreciate that you italicized your additions and underlined the content that you moved. It makes it really easy to spot your edits in addition to looking at your edit history!