User:Moonman15/Battle of Tanagra (457 BC)/Honkshoo The Bird Man Peer Review

Lead: I would change the last sentence in the lead paragraph about the Spartans leaving victorious. It sounds a little biased. Otherwise, I think the lead gives the reader all the information they need to know.

Clarity of Article: Clarity is good and detailed. The order of the sections makes sense.

Coverage Balance: The coverage looks good; I don't see an imbalanced amount of info from one paragraph to the next.

Content Neutrality: The original article seemed to be very biased so thank you for changing that. I would still look over the article and really focus on if there is any possible bias and maybe change some wording. The article just really seems like whoever wrote it loved Sparta.

Sources: Sources actually look really good. It seems as though most information references actual scholarly sources such as Thucydides, etc., and not a bunch of websites. Every piece of information has a source attached to it!

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