User:Moonwatch Snowave/Legal Sea Foods/Football is cool Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Moonwatch


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Moonwatch%20Snowave/Legal_Sea_Foods?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think the article reads very well. I would suggest you include more sources into the article. Ensure that all sources you use are peer-reviewed articles. Be careful when using quote you are not supposed to use too many quotes in a Wikipedia article. I like the data table it provides insight into your points. You did a really nice job ensuring that all the info you provided was provided as a matter of fact and not opinion.


 * Is everything in the article relevant to the article topic? Is there anything that distracted you?
 * Everything in the article is relevant
 * Is the article neutral? Are there any claims, or frames, that appear heavily biased toward a particular position?
 * The article is mostly neutral
 * Are there viewpoints that are overrepresented, or underrepresented?
 * No Very conformed article that balances all of the info well.
 * Check the citations. Do the links work? Does the source support the claims in the article?
 * I would look into this some of the sources are not referenced at the bottom of the article.
 * Is each fact supported by an appropriate, reliable reference? Where does the information come from? Are these neutral sources? If biased, is that bias noted?
 * I would use a few more references; however, the source listed seems to be acceptable.
 * Is any information out of date? Is anything missing that should be added?

I would beef the article contribution up a little bit and fill in any new details you come across in your research.