User:Moose1917/Birding in New York City/PrincessAnna27 Peer Review

General info
Moose1917, Branzino05, BubblyBublik
 * Whose work are you reviewing?


 * Link to draft you're reviewing:https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Moose1917/Birding_in_New_York_City?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Birding in New York City

Evaluate the drafted changes
Because the group is in the early stages of writing their assignment, I will be reviewing the original article.

Lead Section
The lead section accurately describes what this page is about. It briefly mentions some subsections and is otherwise to the point.

Content
The content is up to date, there is even mention of impacts of covid on bird activity in nyc. I like that there is a breakdown going into the boroughs, issues, and organizations that provide aide. I don't think there is anything that is missing.

Tone and Balance
I believe that there is a neutral tone throughout the page.

Sources and References
The majority of the sources seem to be news articles, I didn't see many scientific papers. I randomly clicked on a few links and they were all working. There are articles as late as 2023 so I think there is a lot of current/relevant content.

Organization
I think that the content is well written, it was easy for me to follow along. I also did not notice any major grammatical errors or spelling mistakes to mention.

Images and Media
The images used are relevant to what the page talks about. However, I was expecting more pictures of birds. I think it would be a good idea to add pictures of birds that are comment in NYC.

Overall Impression
Overall, this was a very interesting article and I look forward to hearing more about the birds in NYC.