User:Mora Josh/Language deprivation/RCovell Peer Review

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General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing? Mora Josh
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: Language deprivation

Overall evaluation
It was good though some grammar editing is needed. I did some changes in the wording & grammar. I also added a citation to Neil Glickman and could also add Sanjay Gulati's lecture on Language Deprivation Syndrome if you'd like.