User:Moram Hassan/Kofi Antubam/YL14663p Peer Review

The lead writer has added relevant things to the page specifically, where the artist was born, schools he attended, goof background information.

The beginning sentence could be improved, if there is more information to be found from sources. If not, I believe that this is a good introductory sentence.

The lead also included citations and provided the references on the bottom of the article.

The lead can add some of the artist art-work and provide more information on pieces that the artist has done.

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