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Article Evaluation: Demographic history of Japan before the Meiji Restoration

Everything is relevant to the article title from what I read. Didn't notice anything out of place.

I would restructure the work so that relevant information more closely matched the graphical data provided. Or rename the sections to more closely match the information provided.

Could improve the overview paragraph to give information about the preMeiji/ early Meiji era to give context.

Article is neutral, however relies heavily on graphical data.

Of the sources I checked most were in Japanese and very few linked to non-wiki sources. Of the wiki sources there were a few that I wouldn't use because they don't have a ton of information on them. There are a lot of sources though.

On the talks page there are a few conversations. One questions the validity of one of the sources and another discusses that source. There is also a title change recommendation.

It is pat of the WikiProject Japan and has been given a C-Class rating on the project's quality scale.