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Article Evaluation : Tabloid journalism

 * Everything in this article is relevant to the topic of Tabloid journalism, nothing was particularly distracting.
 * The article does not give any pro's of Tabloid journalism and spends lots of time discussing the relationship between celebrities and the tabloids. It does not discuss examples of Tabloids outside the United States and the UK.
 * The banner at the top of the article says it needs more citations for verification
 * Many of the citations are from articles written in the 1980's and 1990's, so the article could use some more up to date examples from more scholarly sources. The books cited are from the 2000's. The links to the articles work.
 * according to the talk page, this article used to only have one citation and a very personal point of view. so it's improved since then.
 * This article is apart of a Wiki-Ed course assignment for Journalism and Media, that's probably how it improved.
 * The article mostly discusses how Tabloids are used to defame celebrities which is mostly how we talked about them in class.

Other celebrities have attempted to sue tabloid magazines for libel and slander including Richard Simmons in 2017 and Phil McGraw in 2016. Both McGraw and Simmons sued the National Enquirer but only McGraw was successful, winning $250 million.

Copyedit an Article : Hansken
I edited this article for some sentence clarity. It has a couple run on sentences which I broke up into two sentences.
 * "The skeleton of Hansken is still preserved in Florence, Museo della Specola, but the skin, mounted on a wooden support, is now lost." was changed to "The skeleton of Hansken is still preserved in Florence at Museo della Specola. The skin, which was mounted on a wooden support, is now lost."
 * "On the way back from Rome, the elephant died in Florence and Della Bella also drew her corpse after her death on 9 November 1655." was changed to "On the way back from Rome, the elephant died in Florence. Della Bella also drew her corpse after her death on 9 November 1655."