User:Morganelisabeth/Unsafe abortion/IceyBoyBano Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

unsafe abortion


 * Link to the draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Morganelisabeth/Unsafe_abortion/IceyBoyBano_Peer_Review?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_peer_review


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
It's so nice to see you staying on top of your work. You never miss a detail, and that is very important for any article. but I would suggest you add more details about how unsafe abortions are harmful to girls.