User:Morganshields/Evaluate an Article

Which article are you evaluating?
Green economy

Why you have chosen this article to evaluate?
I chose this article because I care about the environment and believe it is important to find ways to improve it. I believe this article matters because there is a big issue in the environment and we need to make a change for a better future. Focusing on a green economy I believe is very important because producing and distributing products in large companies are not as environmentally friendly as I believe they could be.

Evaluate the article
I believe the articles content is relevant. However, it may not be up to date. It states years such as 2010 and 2011 so, I believe more current information could be added. The tone and balance seems good in the article. The author does not take a personal view to the issue. The links work however, in many places in the article it states citation is needed. It looks well written and I did not stumble across any spelling or grammar issues. Only one venn diagram is included. I think maybe a chart or other diagram could help the article for visual. The article is part of several WikiProjects. I would say this article does have some work it needs to change. It is a little hard to follow so maybe structurally placing information would help convey it. Also, I think they need to work on their citations as many people in the talk page are advising them to do so as well.