User:Morganwendel/Hurvin Anderson/Krive14 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?
 * Morganwendel

(provide username)


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Morganwendel/Hurvin Anderson
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Hurvin Anderson
 * Hurvin Anderson

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

I noticed the original article of Hurvin Anderson is not detailed and does not have a thorough comb through of his life.

He has four and a half headings that reference different aspects of his life which could be a place to add.

Adding a section about his family could be a way to give more detail.

Your sandbox has a great start on the broad aspects of his education which could be used as a guide as well.

I also think adding pictures of him and his art to his page could be good as well.

Thank you for the feedback