User:Morganwendel/Hurvin Anderson/Maggieterral Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Morgan Wendel


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Morganwendel/Hurvin_Anderson?veaction=edit&preload=Template:Dashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Hurvin Anderson

Evaluate the drafted changes
* I reviewed the article, couldn't find anything on Sandbox*

Lead: Clear but weak topic sentence, needs more to set up article organization

Content: Content is relevant to topic, just needs more of it in terms of artistic practice/ early life. Content seems neutral. Content stops after 2017, could use more up to date career info/ quotes by the artist.

Sources and References: existing article has a lot of sources to pull from already. Many from galleries, but didn't see any sources that didn't look legitimate. Sources are not immediately current (2017).

Organization: easy to read until the sections just turn into links. More sections with actual type content would create better flow. Also sentence structure feels slightly broken and jumpy.

Overall Impression: The article as it exists has a lot of good sources to pull more content out of.