User:Morgmueller/Bouquinistes/Racheljoffe Peer Review

General info
Morgmueller
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 * Link to draft you're reviewing:Bouquinistes
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists):Bouquinistes

Evaluate the drafted changes
I think the article is very interesting since I've never heard of bouquinistes before. The information provided comes from reliable sources. I love the images selected as they really capture your attention and add a nice visual element. Maybe try to include more descriptive language to help make these images come alive in the writing sections. I think this is a good draft, but there are some minor changes that can be done. The tone at times makes the article seem more like a personal essay rather than an informative piece of writing; make sure to keep a neutral tone. I also see some small grammar errors such as comma placement which can easily be fixed. In terms of content provided, I think the intro and history sections can be more detailed as I don't know many of the terms included in both sections. Maybe look to new academic sources for more historical info to expand upon your current ideas. Finally, don't forget to add in the missing citations. Overall, nice job and I love the topic!