User:Moringa0613/Brogue/Yamjimenez Peer Review

General info

 * Assigned to: Moringa0613, Heynasol, Kensy likes to edit sometimes, Ayr96, LaurenAllen00
 * Link to draft you're reviewing: User:Moringa0613/sandbox

Lead
Guiding questions:


 * I see that some of the information on this draft has been added onto the article.
 * The lead needs a little more information but I'm sure this group is already working on it.

Content
The content added was definitely relevant to the topic! I really like that the draft shows their intention to integrate Brogue in America and Brogue in Europe.

Tone and Balance
So far I don't see any bias or more information on one viewpoint than other. This article seems to be flowing naturally into the right direction.

Sources and References

 * The source they will be using is current and relates to the topic

Organization

 * The content organization is easy to read and I can see what the group intends to do with the article, I don't see any spelling erros

Overall impressions
Guiding questions:


 * It seems that the draft touched on what the important points were and although there's potential for there to be more information, I am sure they still have more to add.