User:Morrandr/Philomath College/LIUOSU Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Andrew Morrison


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Morrandr/Philomath_College/Bibliography?preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_bibliography
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
(Compose a detailed peer review here, considering each of the key aspects listed above if it is relevant. Consider the guiding questions, and check out the examples of what feedback looks like.)

Hi Andrew,

It is a great first draft which focuses on the general history of Philomath College, and interesting to find the college's connection with a reverend. The place is meaningful that it stands for a more accessible education for Benton County residents. I never hear about it before so I really appreciate that your work extends my knowledge about American history.

And you briefly introduce its origin and historical changes especially its reopen with a clear organization. I think the general content of your article is well reflected in the sources you neutrally added. And perhaps it will be better if you can add some intriguing images to your content, such as its layout or any image about Reverend Thomas Jefferson Conner... And will you consider introducing any notable students graduated from this college? I believe this will be very attractive. It seems that you haven't finish the part of construction. In fact, the introduction of the constructive pattern is exactly what I am struggling with in my wikipage, so I am very looking forward to viewing your complete version later to see how you demonstrate the college's construction.