User:Morrandr/Philomath College/Schultry Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Andrew Morrison


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes
Good work Andrew! Couple suggestions,

I'm not sure if it was as a result of still being in the bibliography section but your references don't look quite right and the reference numbers in the article don't direct to them for some reason. I would definitely try to fix that.

I liked that you hyperlinked into topics such as the Great Depression.

It seems like you have a paragraph titled "Construction" that has nothing written in it. I would definitely suggest either deleting it or adding something there as well.

I would definitely be interested to learn more about the college. I'm not sure if there are articles about this, but it would be interesting to hear about notable professors or any other major topics that were taught there. Great work though!