User:Morri455/Human condition/Kowalewskikarley Peer Review

Whose work are you reviewing?

Morri455

Link to draft you're reviewing User:Morri455/Human condition Link to the current version of the article (if it exists) Human condition Evaluate the drafted changes

I think we are both in the same boat with a lack of information, which is why we were paired together. I am wondering where in your article you will be adding this information. From the looks of it, it will greatly benefit your paper, it is just the actual knowing of where in your article you would like to add this is confusing to me. The image that you added to the article had a very good representational background and I think that it can benefit the reader by adding a visual connection to the article. Are there more works of literature that can help explain the human condition? Any scientific studies that you could use? I think you have a very strong point and article in the making, but there is room for you to add more to the article!