User:Mosadzi1/LGBT people in prison/Mets6559 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mosadzi1


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mosadzi1/LGBT_people_in_prison?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * LGBT people in prison

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead:

Lead is great, I feel like it gives a great overall look at the topic.

Content:

The subject headings are great and do a good job of breaking the information down visually for the reader.

Tone and Balance:

Presented without bias, tone is neutral and the draft goes out of its way to show the opposing views that exist in the circuit split.

Sources and References:

This draft is obsessively and thoroughly sourced. Great work.

Organization:

Great organization, feels like it will fit in well to the original article.

Overall:

Great draft, looking at the draft versus the full article I think it will fit in very well and fill in a huge information gap that the original draft is lacking right now.