User:Mosadzi1/LGBT people in prison/Modrake21 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Mosadzi1


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/User:Mosadzi1/LGBT_people_in_prison?veaction=edit&preload=Template%3ADashboard.wikiedu.org_draft_template


 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * LGBT people in prison

Evaluate the drafted changes
Good lead, especially first topic sentence. Content is neutral and backed up by many sources (great job on sources!). Your changes are definitely relevant and add much-needed info to this article. Great writing - concise and easy to read. No grammar or spelling errors or typos. Good organization; the article flows really well from broader info into more detailed nuances of circuit splits and the like. The only thing I can think to change/add for neutrality-sake is mention that there are people who take the view that gender-affirming healthcare is not "life-saving" (but obviously keep the emphasis like you have it, that it is widely regarded as life-saving by professionals and laypeople alike).