User:Moss Enthusiast/Halomonas titanicae/Scienceislife22 Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Moss Enthusiast


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * Editing User:Moss Enthusiast/Halomonas titanicae - Wikipedia
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Halomonas titanicae - Wikipedia

Evaluate the drafted changes
Lead


 * Your lead is concise, not overly detailed.
 * Gives a good description of the bacteria. I like that it has a story behind it with the Titanic, i would add a bit more information about that but in another section.
 * The first sentence gives a good overview of the bacteria itself.
 * You can maybe add a sentence that talks about how it was discovered.

Content


 * The information added seems relevant and is up to date.
 * I think you can add more hyperlinks to other Wikipages, for example: peritrichous flagella, quorum sensing, etc.
 * I would change the biology title maybe to Bacterium Morphology
 * The article draft seems neutral, concise, balanced.
 * The sources are current and have relevant information on the topic.
 * If you are able to add a section about Origin/ Discovery i think it would be beneficial.
 * In the section of "Importance of Corrosion" I would change in the last sentence that "The bacteria help to corrode" with "the bacteria accelerate the corrosion" so it has a more neutral point of view.
 * It is divided into 3 major sections that are important and pertinent to the topic.
 * If it is possible I would add a bit more detail into all sections to give the article a more robust view.
 * I think this is a great draft! Keep up the good work.