User:Moth1999/Perigi's Wonderful Dolls/Presleyjackson Peer Review

General info

 * Whose work are you reviewing?

Moth1999


 * Link to draft you're reviewing
 * User:Moth1999/Perigi's Wonderful Dolls
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)
 * Link to the current version of the article (if it exists)

Evaluate the drafted changes

 * Lead section does a good job of covering the bases of the whole article - also shows the importance of the topic
 * I wonder if the phrase about "one of the first to pioneer the killer toy genre" can be added in the Lead section?
 * The Plot Section is neat and succinct
 * Overall easy to read
 * Are you able to find any pictures to add?
 * Can anything be added about the episode other than its resemblance to the Twilight Zone?
 * Sources are reliable
 * Overall good job!