User:Motley1023/Constance Baker Motley/Lucysteven3 Peer Review

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Motley1023
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The Lead starts off strong, and toward the end, gets into specifics that can be placed into other sections of the biography (such as career). By splitting up Motley's career between her earlier civil rights work and then her later work as judge, the reader can digest the information a little more easily.

I would add education info to share Motley's credentials before her career took off, and also provide any personal life or childhood information you can find.

I would recommend adding photos of Constance Baker Motley, particularly if there are any of her with Thurgood Marshall as the article mentions her work with him. If there is a good photo of her as judge, that would be great toward that section of the article, as well.

You could also add lists of cases she presided over as judge, and information about her death. You could also include information about how her biography was recently published by Tomiko Brown-Nagin.